tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6875455600022660451.post7862541012101609887..comments2023-05-05T08:07:00.549-06:00Comments on Dubyaworld: Practice Story 3: Break-inDubyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00293259085395887899noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6875455600022660451.post-69649115765804438992008-02-01T20:58:00.000-07:002008-02-01T20:58:00.000-07:00Hey good job. The only thing I wasn't sure about w...Hey good job. The only thing I wasn't sure about was right at the beginning. I don't think there were any witnesses, just the old lady that thought she heard something.Colby Bairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08663211119363756391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6875455600022660451.post-36464615426817673772008-02-01T17:05:00.000-07:002008-02-01T17:05:00.000-07:00You write very well, I'm actually jeolous haha. I...You write very well, I'm actually jeolous haha. I really like the way the whole thing flowed, it was well written. You also included many quotes which brought meaning to the story. How the heck did you write all of that in like ten minutes? I'm not much of a typer haha. Anyway your story was well written, and thanks for my first comment about TO, you sound like a sports fan, and thats good! lol<BR/><BR/>Matt Ferrisusumattyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09629604928734289844noreply@blogger.com